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    dots Submission Name: Nothing But An Ex To Medots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    Bytes: 356



    Description:
        moving on feelings


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    dotsNothing But An Ex To Medots
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    If you're not feeling me why be next to me?

    your heart not into it so it's just sex to me

    every single day you always be texting me

    still you always act like you're vex with me

    this shit really be perplexing me

    because you're nothing more than an ex to me




    Submitted on 2012-10-26 18:46:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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