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Submission Name: Always be behind the fool dots

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Author:	Dead Bell
ASL Info:	23/m/Ire
Elite Ratio:	2.42 - 48/129/125
Words:	29

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	698
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Always be behind the fool dots

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Always be behind the fool
To catch his fall

Whisper to his hear
Things he will not understand

For we are suspicious of
Our second shadow

Submitted on 2012-10-27 09:18:20 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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when i was reading this it felt that its about regrets.
something like you did something and later your conscience starts telling you "i told you so"
and i felt a hint of fight club on this.
| Posted on 2012-11-07 00:00:00 | by w0ords | [ Reply to This ]
Short and to the point-- always my fave. I feel this could easily be transferred to a haiku if you're interested in that kind of poetry. Is "our second shadow" another part of our identity? I think you're saying we're all fools, which I totally agree with :)
| Posted on 2012-10-29 00:00:00 | by lolaxelmo | [ Reply to This ]

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