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    dots Submission Name: That Songdots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 347
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    dots That Songdots
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    Midnight-madness binds me with
    endless plots each one madder
    more harebrained than
    the one before.
    True
    I do not need you, nor
    do I need to breathe.
    I am quite sure that you
    are a momentary flight of fancy
    That I will assuredly get over
    once I am dead.

    If you were a song and I
    were the singer?
    I would still be the mad man that I am.
    And
    You
    would still be forever
    I can't get you out of my head.

    Frozen flowers frigid framed
    what is the nature of love's game.
    The moon is sinking, sinking fled.
    I am long
    Long overdue for bed.


    In shadow stark you lie
    somewhere far beyond
    what I claim as sky
    Roses blue
    are piled high, soon.

    I will have a rose petal stitched balloon
    I will hitch a ride on the moon.
    And discover the source of this
    you make me crazy, Jungle tune.






    Submitted on 2012-10-27 21:02:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I was stuck in "monetary flight of fancy", what do you mean by this?
    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Do you mean 'momentary' flight of fancy? And why does the 'you' change to 'she' in the last two verses?
    | Posted on 2012-10-27 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper | [ Reply to This ]


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