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    dots Submission Name: Interestingdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I find it interesting how someone could achieve that level of euphoria with out any "supplements".
    I find it interesting how someone could put their heart in a concept they have never experienced.
    I find it interesting how a simple touch could feel like being slammed with a bowling ball...I suppose in a good way.
    I find it interesting how someone could be the happiest person one day and then melencholy the next day.
    I find it interesting, the magnitude of wonder a person could inflict on another.
    I find it interesting that I find this so damn interesting.




    Submitted on 2012-10-28 20:06:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Thank you for the smile.

    I hesitate to say, a very interesting work.

    I'd never really thought much on any of these things but having them pointed out here really makes me wonder.

    May I ask, why a bowling ball?

    I thoroughly enjoyed this. great write.

    | Posted on 2012-10-31 00:00:00 | by Localfreak | [ Reply to This ]


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