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    dots Submission Name: Nothing Goes Forward Without Consequencedots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    3.54 - 368/381/226
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsNothing Goes Forward Without Consequencedots
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    dear old friend
    where have we arrived:
    now we're but a fading memory -

    that spins lies of superbly profound sweetness
    and moments of unbearable bitterness,
    which could only speak of what once was;

    that our time together, however fleeting, held a most significant
    crossing of fates, to have left such indelible a mark
    in mind and heart and reminiscence...

    memory now serves
    where we once were
    friend, my friend, from days of yore




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    Submitted on 2012-10-29 02:30:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I can relate to this. Very frank piece. It is amazing what consequenses can be found and how long they continue to pursue you.
    | Posted on 2012-12-24 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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