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    dots Submission Name: identity crisesdots
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    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsidentity crisesdots
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    touch screens lead into

    easy solutions

    (for the resolute)

    askew in the

    name of google--

    access to sites gives

    entitlement in excess--

    a generation of masks

    en masse groupthinking

    the game of

    identity for one night

    ignorant, ignoring that all the

    days in a life are

    not all lived in that same reflection

    (in the mirror)




    Submitted on 2012-10-29 11:06:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this could really work as a movie intro monologue.
    a movie close the fight club or the watchmen.
    i like the flow of it. now im gonna watch fightclub and then watchmen.
    | Posted on 2012-11-11 00:00:00 | by w0ords | [ Reply to This ]


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