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Submission Name:
identity crises
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Author:
lolaxelmo
ASL Info:
23/F/IA
Elite Ratio:
2.96 - 34/37/38
Words:
70
Class/Type:
Poetry/Society
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Description:
identity crises
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touch screens lead into
easy solutions
(for the resolute)
askew in the
name of google--
access to sites gives
entitlement in excess--
a generation of masks
en masse groupthinking
the game of
identity for one night
ignorant, ignoring that all the
days in a life are
not all lived in that same reflection
(in the mirror)
Submitted on 2012-10-29 11:06:24
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this could really work as a movie intro monologue.
a movie close the fight club or the watchmen.
i like the flow of it. now im gonna watch fightclub and then watchmen.
| Posted on 2012-11-11 00:00:00 | by
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