First off, I think that's a great title because it kind of sets you up for some kind of fable or myth type poem and I think the poem goes a fair way to deliver that.
There's a nice sense of mystery in places also and I always enjoy that in a poem.
Just a couple of things I noted that might help the flow:
I wonder how you'd feel about placing 'you're so high' in italics? It feels like thought dialogue so I think differentiating it like that would help it read more smoothly. And in the penultimate line of that stanza I wonder if you meant 'belong'?
Nice to read this.
And also, I'm not sure if you're familiar with the 'add cool formatting' feature in the submit section, but it gives you all of the HTML code for things like indenting and italics and such (just in case you hadn't discovered that yet :) ).