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    dots Submission Name: Longing Heartdots
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    Author: Darkwarrior
    ASL Info:    27
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 60/64/37
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLonging Heartdots
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    The days go by so slow,
    sunrise. sunfall.
    And the long lonely nights dont help.
    up weary,
    my mind as foggy as the skies do tell.
    the moon that lies so heavily,
    It makes my crying eyes swell.
    and you gaze up at that very same sight,
    tracing the stars you spell.
    of the longing that sits in your heart
    like a child caught in a neverending well.
    Although i cannot hear your voice
    and the everlasting days catch up to my will,
    my pleading heart begs you to know,
    "I love you, still."




    Submitted on 2012-10-30 19:10:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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