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    dots Submission Name: I love you moredots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 546
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    dotsI love you moredots
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                        I love you more than I love
                        the pale moon's glow at midnight.
                        And when I enter the vast vault of sadness
                        Known as sleeping without you near?
                        It is your poetry ringing clear
                        that provides a lullaby to soothe my sighs
                        and end my tears.

                        As I sink deep into silk pillows I remember
                        your intoxicating charm.
                        My dreams bleed into languor.
                        I rub myself on your rare exotic blooms.
                        I become aware of brighter skies
                        Where bonfires cast back the black
                        And laughing girls dance the cha-cha.
                        All the while my night spent dreaming
                        I remember the poetry
                        That is you.








    Submitted on 2012-10-31 22:33:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Amazing, beautiful, thank you for sharing
    | Posted on 2012-11-03 00:00:00 | by metallichick786 | [ Reply to This ]
      you finished this fast and wow I am amazed. Everything about this is just sweet.
    | Posted on 2012-10-31 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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