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    dots Submission Name: Zip Zip and Away :-)dots
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    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsZip Zip and Away :-)dots
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                        Your brown eyes are the brink of
                        abyss and I plunge
                        into their unplumbed depths . At the
                        center of madness I stand
                        cable in hand waiting to finish
                        the dream.

                        I see the sense of you unfurl
                        but I have no poetry left in me.
                        There are no glorious songs of freedom.
                        Nor do I possess even one small
                        enchantment in my hard used bag of tricks.

                        I am still the tree rooted deep
                        in the soil of our love.
                        Now I can only stand fast for you
                        I am the anchor to your zip-line
                        therefore as this cyclone of sponsored
                        despair
                        attempts
                        to tear love from our grasp.
                        Remember when the wind dies
                        I am all down hill waiting.
                        All you have to do is
                        hold on tight.




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    ||| Comments |||
      The best from what I've read of you. The second stanza stood out the most for me. I am enchanted by this.
    | Posted on 2012-11-03 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Going down would be like looking up.
    | Posted on 2012-11-03 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      Dale,

    i think this is the best one of all the poems of yours I've read. Good concrete imagery, original metaphor. Nice job!

    Annie
    | Posted on 2012-11-03 00:00:00 | by annie0888 | [ Reply to This ]


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