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    dots Submission Name: Angel's Angeldots
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    Author: JezreelWolf
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Lostfriend
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    Description:
       Written for a friend who died, always told him he was my angel.


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    dotsAngel's Angeldots
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    Upon his grave, his angel weeps.
    Tears turn to ash, as she fades away.
    His spirit gone, but not forgotten.
    The pain within, too much to bare.
    Now he's but a memory, a part of the past.
    His angel alone, just like before.
    Her screams they echo, through the sky.
    Spirits surround her, to lend their support.
    His angel now defeated, her strength gone.
    Her will of iron, broken like a twig.
    No love left within, inside her heart.
    This angel lost her angel.




    Submitted on 2012-11-03 20:41:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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