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    dots Submission Name: Value of Lifedots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsValue of Lifedots
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    Have you ever had
    Recurring days
    That never seem to end
    Or thoughts and memories
    That rush you once again
    When you least expect them
    Like sudden rain.

    Miserable living a life
    of self inflicted agony
    You would ask yourself
    Is life worth it?
    Or is this just a case of
    Depression and so much tyranny.

    If you ever asked me that
    With no second guessing
    I would tell you live life
    As much and how you can
    Because just waking up
    Is a blessing.





    Submitted on 2012-11-06 11:22:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really like it. Although I have a slightly different view on this subject I appreciate the simplicity and cohesion found in this little poem. Good work!
    | Posted on 2012-11-06 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice mesage here!
    | Posted on 2012-11-06 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen!!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-11-06 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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