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    dots Submission Name: Value of Lifedots

    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsValue of Lifedots

    Have you ever had
    Recurring days
    That never seem to end
    Or thoughts and memories
    That rush you once again
    When you least expect them
    Like sudden rain.

    Miserable living a life
    of self inflicted agony
    You would ask yourself
    Is life worth it?
    Or is this just a case of
    Depression and so much tyranny.

    If you ever asked me that
    With no second guessing
    I would tell you live life
    As much and how you can
    Because just waking up
    Is a blessing.

    Submitted on 2012-11-06 11:22:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like it. Although I have a slightly different view on this subject I appreciate the simplicity and cohesion found in this little poem. Good work!
    | Posted on 2012-11-06 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice mesage here!
    | Posted on 2012-11-06 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]

    | Posted on 2012-11-06 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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