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    dots Submission Name: assumptiondots
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    Author: lolaxelmo
    ASL Info:    23/F/IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 34/37/38
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsassumptiondots
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    assume, assess
    conclude in rash, unrationalized words--
    once i would have
    named them sweet or
    gentle, empty adjectives
    reflecting my intent
    until the individualized
    was dismissed
    a rift created as i am
    lumped with ease and uncare
    into an image
    taught, learned, ingrained
    the projection from a mask that i
    reject with unease and care




    Submitted on 2012-11-06 21:37:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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