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    dots Submission Name: Silent Clockdots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    Description:
       Simple Confusion


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    dotsSilent Clockdots
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    If time will tell I guess I'll never get to know

    Its face got hands that move too slow

    so alarmed, like a time bomb I'm ready to blow

    rushing every second because I just have to go

    not keeping track of how my minutes flow

    too busy searching all around, high and low

    planted my feet and yet still waiting to grow

    twenty four/seven reaping what I tried to sow

    hot or cold season all feel the same in a row

    silent clock. when will I ever really get to know?












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      We are all just integrations in time, finite, corporeally preternatural. We have a conception of the infinite but we are finite. No mater how we stretch our imaginations we cant get past this limitation. We conceive of the opposition and want to rise to the occasion, we dream of the ethereally sublime, conceive its shape, but can we ever really know the intensities of its eccentricities. I admit I aspire to godhead, I like to think of the exercise as the path to enlightenment but I have to admit I am no such enigma to entity. As I keep these thoughts in mind I like to think I do know for there is a great deal of difference between relative rationality and rational relativity.

    Bruce

    | Posted on 2012-11-11 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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