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    dots Submission Name: Me Plus Someone Else..dots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Longing
    Total Views: 640
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    Bytes: 347



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       Short Deep Thought


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    dotsMe Plus Someone Else..dots
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    Even though things are hard I got to save up for me and someone else.

    Because even though I could afford to live I'm still going to need someone else..

    Money,power, respect is great but has no true worth without someone else..

    I just pray that one day I could be that someone else





    Submitted on 2012-11-08 17:04:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I feel the same way. I always wish I could be that someone else that people like, that the girls fall for, that I'm happy.
    | Posted on 2012-11-10 00:00:00 | by Amadan | [ Reply to This ]


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