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    dots Submission Name: This is why music mattersdots
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    Author: Queen_of_spades
    ASL Info:    21/F/Nocturne
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 95/166/107
    Words: 418
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
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       Naturally, if you couldn't tell- this was entirely inspired by Amanda Palmer and Brian Viglione of the Dresden Dolls, of course with a little Jason Webley thrown in. <3


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    For me, it all began with an A. Somehow I got on the receiving end of thirty whacks, but it was the start of a beautiful love affair. Brian was like the heartbeat to Amanda's nervous system. I fell hopelessly in love with them both. I became known to my friends as an anachronism that had an uncanny ability to defy gravity. Over the years, there were a few sex changes, just a small amount of dirty business to attend to, but it was really a necessary evil. We had adventures in the dark, doing night reconnaissance to get out of Boston. I remember around then I also had a lovely tryst with a panicking disco that was sadly cut short before it's time. Just before then I saw the union of my cherished cabaret fracture, lovely Brian was chasing ghosts and beloved Amanda was murdered. It was a world inferno. This split caused me great agony, I was devastated. Though as time went by, I found an unexpected ampersand and realized that all was not lost. I dragged out my spectacles, my bubble pipe and my magnifying glass and began to follow the clues. I caught various conflicting stories but eventually put the pieces together and realized who Amanda's murderer was; Carmen SanDiego. After a trek around the world I finally caught up to her. She tried to make me understand the point of it all, but my mind wouldn't stop reeling to listen. In the process of detaining her she resisted rather skillfully and sadly in the end she got away. At the time, I truly thought that I would never love again. I was wrong. A few years ago, a traveling circus came through my backyard and upon further inspection of a marvelous freak show, I had the pleasure to meet an amazing set of conjoined twins. They had fascinated me and over time they sparsely sent me letters. Even through our few correspondences, I was steadily falling for them. Earlier this year they finally came back and after only a short amount of time I realized that I was, in fact, deeply in love. They were talented, they were beautiful, they had impeccable fashion taste, I couldn't get enough of them. When they were finally free from their contract, I professed my love from the rooftops, I couldn't contain my joy. We are rather happy now, but I sometimes wonder if they are ever going to send me any more letters. :]




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