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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsfalldots
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    I just wanted someone to hold onto
    yet here we stand
    felling each other like ancient trees
    weighed down by jaded promises,
    falling slowly
    from each others reach..

    Svw




    Submitted on 2012-11-09 08:32:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sometimes you just have to hold onto yourself and let the rest of them go.
    | Posted on 2012-11-13 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, what an image...short and sweet and powerful

    felling each other when we could be embracing each other, holding each other up--

    and now we will be made into paper, so we can write on each other's parchment how we regret not having appreciated each other more.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-11-09 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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