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    dots Submission Name: falldots

    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    I just wanted someone to hold onto
    yet here we stand
    felling each other like ancient trees
    weighed down by jaded promises,
    falling slowly
    from each others reach..


    Submitted on 2012-11-09 08:32:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sometimes you just have to hold onto yourself and let the rest of them go.
    | Posted on 2012-11-13 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, what an image...short and sweet and powerful

    felling each other when we could be embracing each other, holding each other up--

    and now we will be made into paper, so we can write on each other's parchment how we regret not having appreciated each other more.

    | Posted on 2012-11-09 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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