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    dots Submission Name: Emptinessdots
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    Author: Amadan
    ASL Info:    16/M/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 4/3/5
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsEmptinessdots
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    Don't you hate it when the emptiness comes back
    When the world just seems to give up on you
    And all you have is yourself
    The TV, food, and a computer

    And sometimes not even the computer

    But again, back to the emptiness
    That feeling of nothing
    It seems paradoxical, but
    If you know the feeling

    You understand




    Submitted on 2012-11-10 20:32:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That lonely empty feeling for me is normal, i know exactly what you are talking about. i just use it to my advantage by doing some soul searching and learning how to be independent..
    | Posted on 2012-11-11 00:00:00 | by YoungKaizen | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey I don't have a tv well not one that works anyway.
    And if I could just get the world to leave me alone
    I would be so happy. Gosh I guess I don't understand.
    I am too full to be empty and the world is too small to contain me.
    | Posted on 2012-11-10 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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