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    dots Submission Name: Parlez-vous Romance?dots

    Author: DaleP
    ASL Info:    57/M/TX
    Elite Ratio:    6.21 - 629/553/330
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsParlez-vous Romance?dots

    I showered this morning with chaos
    A direct result of last night's
    Simple little question

    Parlez-vous romance?

    When I closed my eyes I found
    Somewhere in the dark I had transformed
    From a man with a plan
    Into a plot devised by mother mayhem
    I live in a dream now possessed by
    A Jungle woman's eyes
    I am surrounded by brown
    Her eyes are a hunger
    Hunting me
    But I get mixed up
    I just can't tell
    If the hunger belongs to she or me
    But the brown is all around
    Softer than feathers floating to
    To the ground
    Twirling and twirling and twirling around
    I am lost in a world of nothing but brown
    Her eyes have me floating
    On shadows of moon
    I am dreaming of kisses
    O no
    Don't get me started on lips

    Parlez-vous- romance?

    Submitted on 2012-11-10 21:56:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      As Gomez says, "Cara Mia! That's French!" Not the Cara Mia part (which is Spanish) but since I know little of either we'll just go with Gomez' fascination for such things.
    | Posted on 2012-11-13 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      the answer is yes. I really like this and the picture goes well with the poem.
    | Posted on 2012-11-10 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]

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