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    dots Submission Name: Street Lifedots
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    Author: YoungKaizen
    ASL Info:    25/M/Brooklyn,NYC
    Elite Ratio:    1.26 - 4/6/19
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 1002
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Short assessment of my teen years..


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    dotsStreet Lifedots
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    Even though my mind is on my school books my heart is in the street

    Running around with a bunch is losers that are not afraid of police

    Robbing, fighting, gambling and rapping to famous rappers beats

    Being all we could be like the army but with a gangster
    twist

    cutting classes for big booty asses l hang out were the

    worst people meet

    I'm just am educated fool with a lot of heart so don't ever get me pissed




    Submitted on 2012-11-11 14:07:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey, a comment box. You got ahold of jimmy??? You're gonna love it.

    This piece reminds me of my young self. Hanging with all the dopers.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-11-11 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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