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    dots Submission Name: A Mothers Lovedots
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    Author: BestxDeceptions
    ASL Info:    22, Female, Kentucky.
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 25/66/49
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsA Mothers Lovedots
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    Healing comes to those who seek it.

    I never seek anything.



    When lovers become

    parents to those they love



    tears fall

    on those they were not for.



    When does life start

    to feel better?



    We teach our children

    to be great.



    We teach them to feel

    loved and cherished.



    We show them why life

    matters.



    We tell them they are

    perfect.



    Why are my lessons missing?

    This circle will not

    continue.



    You will always feel

    your motherís love.




    Submitted on 2012-11-11 23:56:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thank you!
    | Posted on 2012-11-17 00:00:00 | by BestxDeceptions | [ Reply to This ]
      well done
    | Posted on 2012-11-17 00:00:00 | by Nessyjane | [ Reply to This ]


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