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Lord how can I reach my true potential when I'm now holding back?
In situations I'm supposed to dominate I'd rather people catch up
Maybe because I'm scared of their reaction or maybe I'm just lost
How can I be all I could be when people can't handle my success
I'm I supposed to stand there and wonder or must I make a move?
Or is wanting the right thing done stopping me from getting it done?
Because thinking good slows me down while other people are going
Not knowing how my next move will end up is holding me back..
Submitted on 2012-11-12 03:42:04
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Can you explain this to me? What is it you're doing that you're having trouble performing up to par? Your job, your missionary service for God, what is it???
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