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    dots Submission Name: Down With The Sicknessdots
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    Author: Amadan
    ASL Info:    16/M/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 4/3/5
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
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    dotsDown With The Sicknessdots
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    A fever has its hold on me
    A sickness so dark and binding
    Shadows crawl beneath my skin
    Cold shadows, haunting shadows
    Shivers of cold; muscles sore
    Down with the sickness I am
    Sleepless nights
    Tired limbs
    No warmth found in any light

    Monsters seen in darkest night
    Shadows found near every light
    Sleep finally comes at five
    Yet that’s not enough




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