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    dots Submission Name: Metaphysical Mystiquedots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
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    dotsMetaphysical Mystiquedots
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    A good place to start would be an introspective analysis of self, but what of the ramifications of objectified manifest? If evil is incarnate then what is the nature of corporeally preternatural? Can we save each other from the truisms of self we all embody, or do we all wallow in the pandemic phatic of our own fatidic as we seek augur's tout. My imagination tells me I can create a personification that has mystical properties but can this be functional garb or is it basically illusion. Can we touch each other, or even ourselves with these extrapolations? So many of us live by this platonic proxy photic aimed humanitarian instinct, maybe the reason we don't seem to succeed is because we need to be bad to be good. Further some of us are so bad that we obviously don't deserve to live but are those of us so inclined doomed to die of the ramifications thereof? And will this malady be a contagious virulence for all? Were it not for the astonishingly astounding and incredible nature of life itself I would almost be forced to abjure the nature of metaphysics on a corporeal level. Fortunately for me the answer is much more simple, I need someone to make love to, or fuck if you will. I believe in retrospect this is obviously clear! Forgive my blither.




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      This is great food for thought, and in the end, you got to get you some because you are over thinking things? Lol, yeah.


    | Posted on 2013-01-11 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      let's get metaphysical, metaphysical, let me hear your poetry talk, poetry talk.

    we can't save each other, we have to save ourselves...if we try to save each other, we'll all go down...so we might as well get real physical as much as possible before the end happens...make good use of the time left.

    have some in-body experiences.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-11-16 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      I am pretty sure this is not a succubus poem however you did mention evil and f-ucking so I am not 100 percent on that.
    Also I think it would serve all us evil f-uckers right if we woke up one morning and discovered life was just a computer error on a hard drive that was in the process of being erased.
    | Posted on 2012-11-15 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]
      True, true and true. Functional it is... perception is reality, at least for a while, usually long enough. See "Principle of Polarity" and "Principle of Rhythm" for starters. The basics of magic, or most other things for that matter have some fairly obvious rules.
    | Posted on 2012-11-13 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Are you saying that you think of sex as metaphysical?

    Quite a round a bout way to say it,
    but nicely readable to vocabulary-deficient person such as myself.
    This kinda explains some of your other more verbose pieces...youve often spoken of the metaphysical mystique
    and if it all boils down to really wanting some sexual satisfaction,
    then I can begin to put into context some of the more difficult wordings...make a little more sense of some pieces when seen from this perspective.


    Nice to see a new post from you, Bruce.
    | Posted on 2012-11-13 00:00:00 | by latentlylyrical | [ Reply to This ]


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