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    dots Submission Name: With the hours come the flowersdots
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    Author: AsiaticFox
    ASL Info:    28/M/A butterfly's dream
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 254/389/301
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 1326
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    dotsWith the hours come the flowersdots
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    I am forever in your debt, O Wonderful One!

    With the hours come the flowers
    and my throat is not hushed from song.
    With the daylight come the delights
    and my feet are not still amidst the throng.

    Glory to Jehovah!
    Glory to the One and Only God!
    Let there not be heard the sound of weeping
    in the streets throughout the land.
    Let misery forget its ways,
    and tears forget their purpose.
    Let one and all share in the rejoicing.




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    ||| Comments |||
      It is rather a pleasant thought, I can't deny that.
    Well-written, although not being of that religious persuasion, I can't relate as well.

    "With the hours, come the flowers" now that is a line worth repeating. That line alone makes the poem, it's so subtle and yet wondrous. The rest of the poem is relevant and supportive, but this line is the gold of it.

    --Carrie
    | Posted on 2013-06-07 00:00:00 | by Carosuel | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it very much, for I believe the same thing! Thank-you
    | Posted on 2012-11-17 00:00:00 | by darkwhtangel | [ Reply to This ]


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