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    dots Submission Name: Soul Searchingdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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       Religion God Sin Love Hate Devil Heaven Hell... So many questions surround these things so many unanswered questions.. so many... feelings.. thoughts...


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    dotsSoul Searchingdots
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    I am nothing but a lost soul
    A lost soul who is searching, seeking, and longing for guidance.
    Naïve and impressible maybe so.
    Tired and hurting most defiantly.

    Forever I have been left in limbo
    Left on the edge
    As if I am forgotten
    Just left on a shelf for another day of work, yet that day never came
    I have yet to see the day, where my heart aches no more
    I have yet to see the day, where my soul is not a stained black from all the pain it’s endured

    I can only search for so long until I begin to wonder
    Is there even anything out there to find…
    Are there even any answers

    Is “my” day ever going to come…?




    Submitted on 2012-11-16 21:18:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nothing to find "out there". All the treasure is inside. Turn around and look within :)
    | Posted on 2012-11-24 00:00:00 | by elephantasia | [ Reply to This ]


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