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    dots Submission Name: submersiondots
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    Author: jeniecel
    ASL Info:    28/f/philippines
    Elite Ratio:    3.22 - 313/373/169
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    the sea troubles me with metaphors
    like fishermen in their boats clogging its holes
    their fear makes no sound like love
    rutted in a bed of rose petals
    and cuts.


    in the lousy, enormous waves
    the tambourine clangs like a heart, there is a cushion
    pleated on the sea bed for anchor
    I will never know.
    I fell asleep, rapt, wary,
    in shipping lanes
    knowing beginnings
    never continuance.

    I supposed he saw me
    in the corners of leaden street
    back in September leaves blew
    mornings strike on windows
    preoccupy the alleys, foster-
    after a gap- the aged melancholy
    in my eyes.


    he saw me


    As I surf in cooling waters
    its depth cracking up from deep word surfaces
    tied to my tongue
    knowing we've come too far
    to discourage irreversible tears.










    Submitted on 2012-11-18 08:26:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is an interesting piece...it keeps on the verge of turning into a happy ending, but never quite gets there...

    the irreversible tears..can't take back the heartbreak...the lousy, enormous waves.

    somehow "lousy" seems out of place and right in place all at once.

    jacob
    | Posted on 2012-11-20 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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