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    dots Submission Name: You Beautiful Thingdots

    Author: EndOfMay
    Elite Ratio:    5.76 - 1/1/1
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Thinking of you, my dear lover.

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    dotsYou Beautiful Thingdots

    My favorite piece of the past,
    You beautiful thing.
    So good to think of you.

    Who can crush my heart,
    yet leave it more beautiful than before?

    With you gone,
    I feel as I am with nothing,
    Yet with everything.

    Thank you,
    You beautiful memory.

    Submitted on 2012-11-18 19:15:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I loved it, I related with it in so many ways! Thank U for sharing such a beautiful poem!
    | Posted on 2012-11-18 00:00:00 | by darkwhtangel | [ Reply to This ]

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