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    dots Submission Name: You Beautiful Thingdots
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    Author: EndOfMay
    Elite Ratio:    5.76 - 1/1/1
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1138
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Thinking of you, my dear lover.


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    dotsYou Beautiful Thingdots
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    My favorite piece of the past,
    You beautiful thing.
    So good to think of you.

    Who can crush my heart,
    yet leave it more beautiful than before?

    With you gone,
    I feel as I am with nothing,
    Yet with everything.

    Thank you,
    You beautiful memory.




    Submitted on 2012-11-18 19:15:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I loved it, I related with it in so many ways! Thank U for sharing such a beautiful poem!
    | Posted on 2012-11-18 00:00:00 | by darkwhtangel | [ Reply to This ]


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