[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Elmdots

    Author: crashley
    Elite Ratio:    0.43 - 3/26/100
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 755
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 76


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    my nightmares on elm street
    were all too real.

    Submitted on 2012-11-18 22:58:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Bond written by saartha
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    AI written by poetotoe
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Every..... written by jackz
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Linger written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Happy Saint Patrick's Day written by poetotoe
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    Fasade written by jackz
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]