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    dots Submission Name: Apple Treedots
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    Author: crashley
    Elite Ratio:    0.43 - 3/26/100
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsApple Treedots
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    Apple tree, apple tree
    You hold no logic anymore for me
    Go now-
    Go and tell your Gravity:

    I would like it to leave me be.




    Submitted on 2012-11-18 23:11:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Just because your disenchanted doesn't mean you should become disenfranchised!!! Take heart, credence is its own fecundity.

    Salaciously yours,
    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-11-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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