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    dots Submission Name: Girlsdots

    Author: crashley
    Elite Ratio:    0.43 - 3/26/100
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    She says she can't.
    I say I won't.
    Together, we aren't.

    I wish we would.

    Submitted on 2012-11-18 23:11:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh my goodness.

    This is short and sweet. And I love it. I don't know why. I don't know what it is about it. I guess, it's thought-provoking and honest and sweet.

    | Posted on 2012-11-26 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      I wish I had one too.

    | Posted on 2012-11-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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