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    dots Submission Name: Liarsdots
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    Author: crashley
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    dotsLiarsdots
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    "I spy," I said,
    Though my eyes were closed
    "I'm high," she said,
    Though she'd barely smoked

    "We lie." I said,
    My body tangled in my sheets
    "All the time." She said,
    But didn't make a peep.




    Submitted on 2012-11-18 23:13:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't know, is it really a lie to think we're going to be something good for each other? Perhaps its efficacy is questionable but at least it's proper explication.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-11-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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