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    dots Submission Name: Patient 112dots
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    Author: crashley
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    dotsPatient 112dots
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    He asked about my tattoo,
    And then he held my hand.
    He said he'd been there too
    I knew he'd understand.




    Submitted on 2012-11-18 23:14:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very sweet :)
    | Posted on 2012-12-10 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]


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