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    dots Submission Name: The Alphabetdots
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    Author: crashley
    Elite Ratio:    0.43 - 3/26/100
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Alphabetdots
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    Twenty-six characters,
    Learned young-
    Nothing changes;
    Everything does instead.
    Twenty-six characters do not change
    The lines are all the same
    But you are different,
    on your dying day
    Twenty-six.

    What did you say?




    Submitted on 2012-11-18 23:16:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I get the whole 26 letters in the alphabet thing. But I feel like I'm missing what this is supposed to be showing me. Did someone die while texting? I feel like the words should paint more of a picture. Even impressionists give us a sense, a shadow of their subjects. I just don't feel like I have enough here to gain my bearings.

    Jane
    | Posted on 2012-12-02 00:00:00 | by JanePlane | [ Reply to This ]
      Empirically existential epistemology. Perhaps we are but dialectic semantics but I still believe in our linguistic syntax. Each one of us a unique diction with its own intrinsic affinities with infiniteness and manifest destiny!!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2012-11-19 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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