Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Nomads Waydots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: S.A.M.
    ASL Info:    26/f/xx
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 476/419/137
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1171
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 869



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNomads Waydots
    -------------------------------------------


    forgotten thoughts of yesterday
    trimble be for the hope
    tomorrow won't bring
    mirror mirror
    laying broken on the moon
    where did that little girl go
    was she ever here
    nevermore to look away
    distorted reflections trapped within
    say you'll love me
    I won't walk away
    I'll run blindly toward the sun
    while you SCREAM remorse
    to the man in the moon
    goodbye reality must you float away
    childhood was a dream
    lost when you awoke
    to me
    lie again and say you'll never leave
    truth is a mirage
    a thirst ing man once claimed
    stand aside as the face of time
    collides with the hand that
    feeds the bread crumbs you
    think Systane
    turn from your desired
    watch your world catch fire




    Submitted on 2012-11-19 00:13:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. Makes one wonder if one or the other, even both the poetic persons (narrator) and the girl are the nomad in their own unique ways. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2014-02-08 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    196490

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Fasade written by jackz
    Ache written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    I Do, I Do written by poetotoe
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Cover written by saartha
    written by Daniel Barlow
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    True Death written by layDsayD

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry