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    dots Submission Name: Nomads Waydots
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    Author: S.A.M.
    ASL Info:    26/f/xx
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 476/419/137
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNomads Waydots
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    forgotten thoughts of yesterday
    trimble be for the hope
    tomorrow won't bring
    mirror mirror
    laying broken on the moon
    where did that little girl go
    was she ever here
    nevermore to look away
    distorted reflections trapped within
    say you'll love me
    I won't walk away
    I'll run blindly toward the sun
    while you SCREAM remorse
    to the man in the moon
    goodbye reality must you float away
    childhood was a dream
    lost when you awoke
    to me
    lie again and say you'll never leave
    truth is a mirage
    a thirst ing man once claimed
    stand aside as the face of time
    collides with the hand that
    feeds the bread crumbs you
    think Systane
    turn from your desired
    watch your world catch fire




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      Wow. Makes one wonder if one or the other, even both the poetic persons (narrator) and the girl are the nomad in their own unique ways. Thanks for sharing.
    | Posted on 2014-02-08 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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