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    dots Submission Name: A New Life At Midnightdots
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    Author: HannaLeigh
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Inspirational poem I created New Years 2012


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    dotsA New Life At Midnightdots
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    I had a Kiss at Midnight
    For the First Time,
    Watching the Ball Drop,
    Your heart synced with Mine.
    I Started a New Year
    With a Smile on my Face,
    I've learned that Happiness
    Comes at Pace.
    I'm Letting Go
    Of Regrets From Times Past,
    Because Nothing in Life
    Will Ever Last.
    I'm Starting New,
    With You at My Side.
    Hand in Hand,
    You fill my Hopes and Pride.
    Though Life May not be
    The Best We Imagined,
    You've made it better Now
    Than I'd Ever Fathomed.
    I know It'll End Sooner than We Think,
    A year is Quick, And Life will Shrink..
    But I'm more Alive now
    Than I'll ever Be
    There's plenty to Live for
    And to See,
    And with This New Year,
    And You at My Side,
    I'm Unafraid
    Of what the World Has To Hide




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