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Author: SweetAndOhSoME
ASL Info:    17/f/Here
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Class/Type: Misc /Longing
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Just a little something I found looking through my old journals. It spoke to me once again, so I figured I'd transfer it to my submissions.


Once so cherished, once so sweet.
Once so strong, now so weak.
It's too short to be poetry,
To undefined to mean anything,
But it means something.
It must mean something.

Submitted on 2012-11-21 05:20:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Even the completely abstract and noumenal have a certain presence regardless of their imaginary state!!

| Posted on 2012-11-21 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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