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    dots Submission Name: Demonsdots
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    Author: Amadan
    ASL Info:    16/M/Utah
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 4/3/5
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsDemonsdots
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    Have you ever looked deep
    Inside your head
    And seen the Shadows?

    The demons, the shadows
    The voices that whisper
    Without ceasing

    I have
    I see them
    I hear them

    And I take them and bend them
    Channel them
    As an Aes Sedai with The Power

    I channel the Darkness
    And become a fellow Demon
    Can't you see my dark aura?




    Submitted on 2012-11-21 19:35:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I dont like looking in my own head for the most part. I get sucked in there and cant get out. Other peoples thoughts are more interesting than mine any day.
    | Posted on 2012-12-09 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]


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