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    dots Submission Name: Criminaldots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsCriminaldots
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    the Graceful turning of a page
    remembered in the ghost of a memory
    transformes the future and delicately places the lines of my fingertips from one side to the other in order to maintain a print

    the evidence of things not seen here
    am I a criminal
    or is this faith




    Submitted on 2012-11-26 12:08:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I miss turning pages the most about reading books... actual pages to turn and clip and mark notes on. To refer back to and scan. Paper is great, but electronic reading is much lighter to collect and carry.
    | Posted on 2012-12-09 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      Happy day girl! Long time! I am glad to see you still posting and I really liked, "tranformes the future and delicately places the lines of my fingertips from one side to the other in order to maintain a print."

    That was a hauntingly beautiful passage and gave me a soulful visual!

    Great job smiles to share :-)
    | Posted on 2012-11-29 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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