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    dots Submission Name: Do You Want Medots
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    Author: darkwhtangel
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 12/10/2
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       I'm going through a high sex drive right now, and I hope it lasts a long time!!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsDo You Want Medots
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    I think of you
    I'm waiting and needing
    I can feel your touch.

    Ecstasy of my dreams
    That make it real.
    My imagination runs wild.
    Man handling, your fingers
    Run the length of my body.
    Scratching, slapping, pinching
    And yelling" your a bad girl!"
    I only want more
    Whip me and chain me
    Into submission.
    I feel the fire.

    I beg "please take me"
    You make me squeal,
    Yell and scream!
    Can you feel my desire?




    Submitted on 2012-11-27 23:32:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Fire, desire, sexy raunchy poem, I like it
    | Posted on 2013-01-01 00:00:00 | by Wonderwords | [ Reply to This ]
      expression of lust maybe, maybe love
    | Posted on 2012-12-09 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this. It makes me wish I was still able to care again.
    | Posted on 2012-12-06 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this. I feel the same way a lot too. And instead of using "U" in "U make me squeal", you should use 'you'.

    Also, it makes it look better when the first word in each line is capitalized.
    | Posted on 2012-11-28 00:00:00 | by Amadan | [ Reply to This ]
      If you have a drive for something why are you waiting? :) I dunno I think the format needs a bit of work but can't really comment on the content. If that's what you like...

    Check out this poem of mine, it's kinda similar to this one: http://www.eliteskills.com/z/21328
    | Posted on 2012-11-28 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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