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    dots Submission Name: BORN FOR THISdots
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    Author: iamJayMer
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
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       We are born for greatness :D


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    dotsBORN FOR THISdots
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    I am a sinner that is very true

    Doing things I should not have to do

    I doubt myself if I can do it

    Degrading myself like falling into pit

    I have my insecurity to the people I see

    Turning my head into an unwatered tree

    But I should have feel no astray

    Cause I and us are not born this way

    I am a sinner that is very very true

    But repenting with your heart is what you should really do

    I doubt again myself if I can do it

    But a great faith with Lord you can all surpass it

    I have my insecurity to the many people I see

    But your unique not in our eyes but what God can see

    Things might torn you like a batch of blitz

    But with resiliency and passion you are born for this




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