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    dots Submission Name: Midnight Ramblingsdots
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    Author: darkfeathers
    ASL Info:    19/female/beddybyeland
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 4/2/10
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Rant/Romance
    Total Views: 1197
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    Bytes: 1609



    Description:
       just ramblings in the middle of the night


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    dotsMidnight Ramblingsdots
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    lying wakeful at 2 am
    alone in the world
    orbiting around life
    never meeting orbiting together
    just glancing off each other

    how am i in a room with
    a roommate underneath me
    so perfect she doesn't snore

    the loudest thing i hear is the ac
    blowing like a tornado
    ruffling my papers

    i can hear it on the other end
    of my never-ending skype call

    why is the one person i wanna orbit
    in another galaxy

    i feel like i should
    just push through the screen
    wake him in the dead of night
    and make love to his waking form

    but every time i try i realize it's not possible
    that the axiom is false
    and just another stupid human saying

    in truth i'm alone
    as alone as anyone
    that the pictures on the wall
    and the food stuff in my dressers
    and the daily routine
    telling me to live and live and don't stop living
    is all meaningless.

    i start at the sensation of hunger clawing my belly
    it's the first thing i've felt all day
    that makes me wanna move
    get up from this stupor
    or other peoples lives
    watching relationships unfold and blossom
    while mine withers untouched for so long

    i'm a rose and one of my petals has fallen
    will i be able to kiss my beast in time
    will our orbitals not glance
    but find a new center of gravity
    around one another




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