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    dots Submission Name: Change My Linesdots

    Author: EmptyBox
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 76/64/31
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    dotsChange My Linesdots

    Change my lines. Color me the way you think I am,
    and I will grow into the pattern you create for me.
    I will become something you want. I will be Everthing
    you wanted and thought I would be. I can do it;
    I'm strong enough to withstand some shifts and shaping.

    But if you love me for who I am, I'll never be anything
    except Me. That's a sad thought. If I change later,
    you might not like it. I won't have the shape
    you imagined. I will be a scraggly bush, or too full
    to press myself into your corners. I will be wild
    and full of surprise. No one can depend
    on the unpredictable.

    Submitted on 2012-12-11 01:44:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's a common feeling. When you are in a relationship usually the one with the stronger will tries to change the other and I believe that they do it eventually.

    However, in long term relationships or friendships, or any kind of relationship, come to that both parties undergo a transformation from their original beings. The mere contact with someone else can promote it but as I said whenever extensive contact has been made.

    Well, that's about it
    Hope you are doing well :)


    Ethan Brody

    | Posted on 2012-12-11 00:00:00 | by Ethan Brody | [ Reply to This ]

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