Sign up to EliteSkills

Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Change My Lines

Author: EmptyBox
Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 76 /64 /31
Words: 133
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Longing
Total Views: 1373
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 712


Change My Lines

Change my lines. Color me the way you think I am,
and I will grow into the pattern you create for me.
I will become something you want. I will be Everthing
you wanted and thought I would be. I can do it;
I'm strong enough to withstand some shifts and shaping.

But if you love me for who I am, I'll never be anything
except Me. That's a sad thought. If I change later,
you might not like it. I won't have the shape
you imagined. I will be a scraggly bush, or too full
to press myself into your corners. I will be wild
and full of surprise. No one can depend
on the unpredictable.

Submitted on 2012-12-11 01:44:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!


  It's a common feeling. When you are in a relationship usually the one with the stronger will tries to change the other and I believe that they do it eventually.

However, in long term relationships or friendships, or any kind of relationship, come to that both parties undergo a transformation from their original beings. The mere contact with someone else can promote it but as I said whenever extensive contact has been made.

Well, that's about it
Hope you are doing well :)


Ethan Brody

| Posted on 2012-12-11 00:00:00 | by Ethan Brody | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?