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    dots Submission Name: to figure youdots

    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 204/205/140
    Words: 551
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 914
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1986

       you can listen to the actual song here:
    song recorded at Tracy G's studio
    by the Folk Underground Resurrection

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    dotsto figure youdots

    rhythm guitar

    Dark & stormy nights are coming
    why don't ya come & follow me for awhile...
    Take a chance & listen Mr.
    it may be something you wish for
    come along for a drive...
    come along for a time...
    letting everything go by...

    guitar continues
    I remember moments
    when you placed your head of torments
    upon my lap
    and we were kindly listening
    to the peaceful sounds & whisltes
    in mountain top

    I remember cattle!
    I remember freedom!
    and I remember sounds!
    I remember a feeling...
    whoa oh oh

    Chorus: If I should be with you
    If I should be with you
    I don't know what I'm gonna do
    But, I've got a feeling it's got a lot to do
    with you
    yeah you!
    If I should figure you
    If I should figure you
    what in the world am I
    supposed to do?
    oh baby if you only knew
    I love you
    yes I do

    If I should be with you
    If I should be with you
    where in the hell do I go from here?
    It's not exactly clear without you.
    darling you

    guitar solo

    Come along & take a chance
    and we may even find romance
    while we dare...
    Throwing pebbles in the gloom
    and maybe if you let me...
    I'll take the splinter away

    we can file it down
    we can file it down
    we can file it down
    when you come around...

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