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    dots Submission Name: to figure youdots
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    Author: pioneerheart
    Elite Ratio:    4.51 - 204/205/140
    Words: 551
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 873
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1986



    Description:
       you can listen to the actual song here:
    www.myspace.com/guivarifurgurl
    song recorded at Tracy G's studio
    by the Folk Underground Resurrection


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    dotsto figure youdots
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    rhythm guitar

    v1.
    Dark & stormy nights are coming
    why don't ya come & follow me for awhile...
    Take a chance & listen Mr.
    it may be something you wish for
    come along for a drive...
    come along for a time...
    letting everything go by...

    guitar continues
    v2.
    I remember moments
    when you placed your head of torments
    upon my lap
    and we were kindly listening
    to the peaceful sounds & whisltes
    in mountain top

    I remember cattle!
    I remember freedom!
    and I remember sounds!
    I remember a feeling...
    oh
    whoa oh oh
    (pause)

    Chorus: If I should be with you
    If I should be with you
    I don't know what I'm gonna do
    But, I've got a feeling it's got a lot to do
    with you
    yeah you!
    If I should figure you
    If I should figure you
    what in the world am I
    supposed to do?
    oh baby if you only knew
    I love you
    yes I do

    If I should be with you
    If I should be with you
    where in the hell do I go from here?
    It's not exactly clear without you.
    darling you

    guitar solo

    v3.
    Come along & take a chance
    and we may even find romance
    while we dare...
    Throwing pebbles in the gloom
    and maybe if you let me...
    I'll take the splinter away

    Bridge:
    we can file it down
    we can file it down
    we can file it down
    when you come around...




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