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    dots Submission Name: Who I am ..dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
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    Words: 317
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    dotsWho I am ..dots
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    Hate this life I am living
    Feel like breaking shit
    Wanting nothing more than to die at this very moment
    I do not want to wake up tomorrow
    I wish I had put that gun in my mouth... I wish I were dead

    I am beyond dead inside anyways- what would be the difference?

    Part of me wants to run and run far, far away
    But then what would be the point?
    Dying is so much easier

    I am fed up!
    I am tired!
    I am just and empty shell..
    Lingering at the edge..
    At any moment I'll topple over it

    I am done! I am done!
    Only fucking struggles remain here for me
    Only heartache and disappointments greet me each day

    I can only change the things that are "changeable"
    I have accepted what I cannot change
    I have the courage to change what can be changed...
    There is nothing left that I can do.

    Nothing but an empty shell and it is too late to fulfill me that ship sailed long ago.
    I am an unfinished product created by “our” God
    I was put on a shelf to come back to at a later day,
    However, that date never came.
    I ended up only being good for others to use me, abuse me, and throw me out when they got bored of me.

    Nothing remains here for me on this earth – in this world
    I have truly been searching for my soul –
    Yet, I still lack one.
    I am nothing more than a shell, an unfinished product of our Creator.

    I am tired of living a life I was never meant to live
    I have been beaten and battered until nothing remained.
    Continually disappointed
    Consistently depression
    Endlessly discouraged

    This world and I were just not meant to co-exist.




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