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    dots Submission Name: A Way With Wordsdots
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    Author: simpleandgreen
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 39/141/136
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I have a way with words.
    It is a gift,
    But mostly a flaw.
    I can convey any message
    Paint a vivid picture
    With just ink and breath.
    I make people laugh
    About situations that
    Never happened
    I make people cry when
    I speak of death
    Yet no one has died.
    I can make the one I love
    Believe i never loved them
    In a couple of
    Sparatic meaningles sentences.
    I hate this way with words
    That makes readers believe
    That I am messed up
    Emotionless
    Hurtful
    and depressed
    When its all just due to
    A way of words.




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      Use it to your advantage and to the service of the need of others and you shall find it less of a curse and more of a gift!
    | Posted on 2012-12-27 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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