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    dots Submission Name: Sensesdots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    24/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 343/189/83
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSensesdots
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    I need me a man
    That can excite my senses,
    Fill me full of energy;
    Who would jump over fences,

    Naw, screw that shit,
    Jump clear over the moon,
    Make silly faces,
    Act like a buffoon

    Just to see me smile,
    Just to make my day.
    I need me a man
    Who will forever stay

    Through bad and then worse,
    Who would tough it out,
    Walk through hell and back,
    Knowing without a doubt

    That I'm worth the fight
    And plenty worth the wait;
    Knowing I'm all he wants,
    Hands down, with no debate.




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      I am totally with you on this, we all need to be like this to really make a relationship amazing and who wants ordinary when amazing is out there?
    | Posted on 2013-03-20 00:00:00 | by DaleP | [ Reply to This ]


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