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    dots Submission Name: Seize The Daydots
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    Author: nwproud
    ASL Info:    27 / vancouver, wa
    Elite Ratio:    5.62 - 280/243/64
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsSeize The Daydots
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    This is my day, the day
    I have decided to make my own.
    One moment, each minute
    at once unique in comparison
    to the hours and days
    built for legacy and legend.
    If I have no man to follow,
    my path will not be one
    of hesitation, or without heart,
    the indifference is my abandon,
    the purpose of my part,
    in a world where judgment
    pursues the attraction of
    peculiar promises and
    vindictive histories.
    May my direction be
    mindful of the losses
    of those before my time,
    defeated by their own account,
    an incomplete book
    of prose, thought and rhyme.






    Submitted on 2012-12-19 22:18:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      in a world where judgment
    pursues the attraction of
    peculiar promises and
    vindictive histories

    That's true, nice observation. A graceful piece.
    | Posted on 2012-12-31 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      Everybody needs at least one Day they can call their very own and savor. This is how they should be lived, definitely!
    | Posted on 2012-12-22 00:00:00 | by EmptyBox | [ Reply to This ]
      Alas, such books are always incomplete. Nice thoughts here.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2012-12-20 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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