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    dots Submission Name: The Christmas Poemdots
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    Author: mugsy
    ASL Info:    68/M/Sooke/ B.C./Can.
    Elite Ratio:    4.1 - 138/106/35
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 524
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 441



    Description:
       A tender heartwarming poem.


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    dotsThe Christmas Poemdots
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    Behold
    A myriad of colored lights
    The Christmas tree,
    It's glimmer reflected
    In the glowng eyes
    of the children
    Happiness instilled in their tiny breasts
    and tummies warmed by hot chocolate
    They raise their wee voices
    in a carol,
    It was at that moment
    With tears in my eyes,
    I realized,
    The little bastards were
    off key........




    Submitted on 2012-12-19 23:56:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      LOL..This was very cute. I always love to read things that get you all emotional and then twist at the end. The suprise gotya is great.
    Mery Christmas!
    | Posted on 2012-12-21 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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